Screenplay

Both I and Naomi were in charge of the screenplay. We initially wrote down our ideas of what we thought the victim character was thinking at the time. here are some of our ideas:

Victim

• scared
• confused 
• anxious 

We also thought about the doctor and what he might be thinking. we thought that me might be wary as he doesn't want to get caught. 

We then focused on the screen play and what we were wanting to write, we able to use the proforma which showed us how to lay out our screenplay effectively so it didn't look messy. We both knew what we wanted the characters to say but we found it difficult to make sure it didn't sound cheesy as this would have ruined our final piece. Although the screen play took a while to write as once me and Naomi had finished and talked back to the group we found that somethings didn't go in the write place, which meant we took it back to re write it. I knew this was for the best of our film as we wanted it to be as effective as possible and didn't want it to sound cheesy. I felt that although it did take some time to write our final script was very effective to our film and portrayed what we wanted it too. overall i am pleased with everyone's efforts into making the script and realistic and effective as possible